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World of a Writer
Contributed by
BlackFire9786
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Wednesday, 18th June 2003 @ 09:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
PoemsonBeauty
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I see a beautiful white stone palace
In every house I see
I can see the whole secret of creation
In one fallen green leaf.
I can look into a bright sunset
And even though it occurs every day
I can always find new bright colors
Somethings always more beautiful than yesterday.
I walk through an ordinary forest,
but see more kingdoms than what exists in all the earths past
I can feel creation everywhere
Like when God created the sky so blue, and the ocean so vast.
I look at a bookshelf, a table, maybe a chair
And can see a red wood forest proud and tall
I see the tree with light shining through its leaves
And could write a book from its birth until its fall.
I smile and spin and jump and laugh
As colored sparks and magic fall like a beauty shower
This world is full of the unknown, with limitless freedom
Welcome to the world of a writer.
Full of light and darkness blended to perfection
The beauty of a sunset, sunrise, and the stars in the sky
All mixed together in an eternally changing
World of eternity passing every one else by.
So dont let earthly limits limit you
Look beyond every surface, beyond the sky.
Dont let this beauty get away.
For without limits, you can fly.
Copyright ©
BlackFire9786
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2003-06-18 09:35:00]
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Re: World of a Writer
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by norm on
Wednesday, 18th June 2003 @ 10:04:46 AM AEST
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Your 'Happy' poem is great
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your dad is wise as most dads are
Bless both you guys..you should go far.
Collect the fin |
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Re: World of a Writer
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by Wellington on
Wednesday, 18th June 2003 @ 11:18:08 AM AEST
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| I think it's very nice- not my style of poetry at all. but you seem to know how to handle lighter poems, and I really like it. Good luck |
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Re: World of a Writer
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 18th June 2003 @ 01:11:35 PM AEST
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worth more than $5 very good write
Shari |
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Re: World of a Writer
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by Dazzle on
Wednesday, 18th June 2003 @ 07:30:23 PM AEST
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| Wonderful describtion, something I lack. I love it! |
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Re: World of a Writer
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by UnleashedFuture on
Wednesday, 18th June 2003 @ 08:31:31 PM AEST
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| "A world seen through different eyes..."...that was something I had written some time ago. But it's true and you say it so well. I don't know for you but it can be a curse in some instances because the rational to us isn't reflected in the way everyone else views things. I'm impressed. |
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Re: World of a Writer
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by shelby on
Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 01:58:41 AM AEST
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this is awesome. you painted such a vivid picture here and I can see it with you. wonderful.
If you ever need inspiration from a sunset come here for a visit they are beautiful!!
Michelle
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Re: World of a Writer
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by MX on
Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 02:30:35 AM AEST
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worth way more then $5...
awesome.
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Re: World of a Writer
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 03:17:38 AM AEST
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Hey Blackfire...you should get at least a $50. for this..it is awesome... the imagery is stunning... you should keep writing happy poems.... you may strike it rich!!!
Jenni |
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Re: World of a Writer
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by wild_heart_of_fire on
Tuesday, 24th June 2003 @ 01:00:45 AM AEST
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i'm not suprised in the least...this was beautiful...i'm still working on mine...hmmm...after i get my five dollars we'll go to the book store together! :) keep it up sis.
Your Twin,
~*riki lynn*~ |
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