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Failed Relationship
Contributed by
PsychoticDreamz
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Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 09:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Depression
Obsession
A fictitious partnership
Crying
Now Dying
Ending a relationship
Consuming
Assuming
Thought that we would last
Scarred
And Marred
Cant leave it in the past
Threats
Any regrets?
Why did you say we're through?
Willing
Killing
I was alive with you.
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2003-06-19 09:35:00]
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Re: Failed Relationship
(User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on
Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 06:05:21 PM AEST
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Whoa... that's quite the bitter last stanza there. Very enjoyable, good job. Like the style.
~ Moonlit |
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Re: Failed Relationship
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 20th June 2003 @ 10:50:47 AM AEST
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| Short but such deep emotion. Great write. |
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