|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
You are my sun flame
Contributed by
venkat
on
Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 10:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
PoemsonBeauty
|
You are my sun flame
Laughing in the sun
Dreaming in the moon
Shining in the stars
Smiling in the flowers
Singing in the rivers
Calling from mountains
And in forests loitering
And in gardens waiting
In the wind whispering
Here and there every where
You seem to be flowing
And dancing in my mind
Throbbing in my heart
Pulsing in my veins
Please take a maiden form
And allow me to look
Into your rainbow eyes
If not tell me how to live
Without your happy hug!
18-6-2003
Copyright ©
venkat
... [
2003-06-19 10:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: You are my sun flame
(User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on
Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 10:38:59 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
again a wondeerful write
Shari |
|
|
Re: You are my sun flame
(User Rating: 1 )
by norm on
Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 10:53:02 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
You created beauty..very well done..
-------------------------------------------
Your mind works well, as one can be
to create illusion for all to see
I may be blind but even me
can see this beauty from oversea |
|
|
Re: You are my sun flame
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 12:41:39 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Venkat, this is marvellous!!!!
Loved it..Keep on shining, my dear!
Jenni |
|
|
Re: You are my sun flame
(User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on
Friday, 20th June 2003 @ 12:30:40 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| I can feel your happiness from here ... it is simply a beautiful poem .. flowing with love and joy ... Jan |
|
|
Re: You are my sun flame
(User Rating: 1 )
by Sandra on
Friday, 20th June 2003 @ 07:45:28 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| this poem rings true. Its simple yet decerative. Nice write. |
|
|
Re: You are my sun flame
(User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 04:07:38 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| stunning write!! this is how i feel about my sweetie, thankies for the smile that is now on my face:) hugs n' love nessa |
|
|
Re: You are my sun flame
(User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 04:08:41 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| p.s. love the title too!! |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
