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Holding Back
Contributed by
joni553
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Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 01:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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When my tears begin to fall
since my mother passed away,
I try to detach myself but
I am backed against the wall.
Those tears turn into a heavy rain -
A never ending flood.
I feel as thought I'm drowning -
Slowly going insane.
As the months roll slowly by
and memories begin to fad,
Ever so slowly I realize that
A piece of my heart has died.
I have to believe that I will see
my mother in another lifetime -
No malls, no shopping no hanging out
A reunion on a higher degree.
That just fine - I'll take it - As long
as it's Mom and me.
Copyright ©
joni553
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2003-06-19 13:35:00]
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Re: Holding Back
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by norm on
Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 05:02:06 PM AEST
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This is a tribute
from daughter to mother
it is beautiful just as it is |
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Re: Holding Back
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 20th June 2003 @ 05:06:00 AM AEST
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I know how difficult this is (I lost my father just over a year ago). Try to be strong. I am sure loads of people have said this to you but it does get easier. It never goes away but it does get easier.
Fantastic poem.
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Re: Holding Back
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by Tanna on
Sunday, 22nd June 2003 @ 02:39:42 PM AEST
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Im SO sorry for the loss of your Mom.
By the way, I like the rhyming scheme you used... 1st and last line rhythm. Neat!
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