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~In Secret Still~
Contributed by
Dazzle
on
Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 08:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I bet this is true love
Because I feel you so
To have you for one day in my arms
Would be enough to last in my world for life long
But that one day is not going to come
I know it
This is true love
Because it's not about your looks
It's not really all that fair
But it is the world to me
To see it appear
I believe in you
When you loose your hope
I will be here
Forever your supporter
In secret still.
Copyright ©
Dazzle
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2003-06-19 20:35:00]
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Re: ~In Secret Still~
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by MoonlitAngel on
Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 11:12:23 PM AEST
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Beautiful, supportive words! True love is never about looks, good for you for realizing that. My first love wasn't by anyone's standards attractive either, but I still fell madly in love with him.
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Re: ~In Secret Still~
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 20th June 2003 @ 06:57:35 AM AEST
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This is great. I especially like the last line "In secret still." So powerful.
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