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The Real Me
Contributed by
squeesh
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Friday, 20th June 2003 @ 05:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The outside I smile I laugh Im cheerful and happy the inside I frown I cry Im depressed and sad Im falling into a never ending hole the openings getting smaller and smaller theres no way to get out the lights fading quickly I try to think of how I got there but Im lost from within lifes gone time has stopped tears are forming fears are rising my bodys shaking and my heads spinning scars are appearing and dreams are fading my knees buckle and I slip from the ledge my pathetic life flashes before my eyes and Im gone good-bye
I can no longer see move or feel the pain is gone and Im separated from the crowd my bodys blistered blood is gushing theres no more worries Im free my spirit can fly Im gone from this place good-bye
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2003-06-20 17:05:00]
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Re: The Real Me
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 20th June 2003 @ 08:37:00 PM AEST
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This was really good I loved this. Nothing really more to say 'cept this rocked.
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Re: The Real Me
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 04:12:16 AM AEST
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nice and emotional, plenty of feeling flowing from this poem,has got an awesome dark quality to it.
In saying this I hope your day/night has improved and you are feeling better about yourself. |
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