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Transcendental Talent
Contributed by
wrybod
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Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 05:05:00 AM in AEST
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A "magic carpet ride" of words
springs from the silver screen
a "corridor" of images
whose like I've never seen
lifts my imagination
far above this mortal role
and I wander with the gods
communicating soul to soul
She who leads me "by the hand"
through the heavens above
teaches me to understand
the joy of perfect love.
The world becomes a better place
more beautiful it seems
and I am reborn as she "spins
her thread" and "Weaves her dreams".
Copyright ©
wrybod
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2003-06-21 05:05:00]
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Re: Transcendental Talent
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by venkat on
Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 05:26:15 AM AEST
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Awww, very nice wrybod,
she has written a great tribute you.. and you have written this superb tribute for her.
Ha.. I was lured....your title drew me in with a false hope..lol..
She will definitely enjoy this and treasure it for a long time..
Thanks for sharing this lovely write..
hey friend, you are missing me a lot
venkat
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Re: Transcendental Talent
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by Wrybod on
Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 06:56:03 AM AEST
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Ven' I know I've fallen well behined with my comments. Several reasons really not the least of whch has been the garden. It's not just the time needed to do it but the time needed to recover from doing it. (theres a little poem in there) I'm nearer 80 than 75
Secondly "norm" and I have been engaged in a long string of private messages. We are finding that we have a great deal in common
My early poems and comments seemed to come easily but of late everything has been taking me so much longer. My mind has been greatly expanded, first by you but then by many others. One grows taller, sees more and therefore treads more carefully
(there's another poem in that)
Excuses made.........I will be catchimg up with old friends today so look out for some "expired"
sorry I meant "inspired" comments later. |
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Re: Transcendental Talent
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by DreamWeaver on
Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 09:44:25 AM AEST
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| This has given me the greatest happiness more than you know ... what a wonderful poem to write for someone!! ... it leaves me with a huge smile upon my face ... thank you wrybod .. I'm overwhelmed you feel this way ... Jan :))))) |
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Re: Transcendental Talent
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 10:02:50 AM AEST
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You have said what so many here believe about a great talent. I am sure she loved the poem as did I
Shari |
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Re: Transcendental Talent
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by Wrybod on
Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 11:46:37 AM AEST
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| You may have noticed a growing appreciation for your work in my comments on your last two or three poems. But your last one is so exceptional that I wanted to do an exceptional comment.......... |
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Re: Transcendental Talent
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by Wrybod on
Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 11:59:22 AM AEST
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I've always thought her poetry remarkable but her last three or four are quite delightful.
I just wanted to do a special comment. |
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Re: Transcendental Talent
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 05:11:41 PM AEST
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| oh this is lovely! you send us all on a magic carpet ride as well does she, much love n' a hug nessa |
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Re: Transcendental Talent
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by Wrybod on
Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 05:38:17 PM AEST
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| I think we all do, each in their own way. |
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Re: Transcendental Talent
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by shelby on
Monday, 23rd June 2003 @ 01:43:09 AM AEST
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written beautifully nice tribute!1
michelle |
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Re: Transcendental Talent
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by Wrybod on
Monday, 23rd June 2003 @ 03:03:23 AM AEST
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| I don't know whether it's me but the poetry on YPDC seems to get better all the time. |
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Re: Transcendental Talent
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by Wrybod on
Tuesday, 24th June 2003 @ 03:28:27 AM AEST
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| I must have pressed the wrong button but my reply is there Sorry Ven' |
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Re: Transcendental Talent
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by Wrybod on
Tuesday, 24th June 2003 @ 03:29:04 AM AEST
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| I must have pressed the wrong button but my reply is there Sorry Ven' |
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Re: Transcendental Talent
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by Jilly on
Friday, 27th June 2003 @ 09:57:52 PM AEST
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One word... ~WOW!!!!
~Sunshine |
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Re: Transcendental Talent
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by Wrybod on
Sunday, 29th June 2003 @ 12:27:08 PM AEST
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| Jilly, THANKS!!!!!! |
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Re: Transcendental Talent
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by norm on
Tuesday, 1st July 2003 @ 02:46:22 PM AEST
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To say the least a perfect feast
of imagery near and wide,
The thing I think at very least
please take me on your ride.
I ain't that big, I ain't a tyke
much room I will not take
while weaving, spinning and the like
please take my brother, Jake...
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Re: Transcendental Talent
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by LadyDama on
Wednesday, 2nd July 2003 @ 03:37:23 AM AEST
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beauty has your talent told
a story of ancestors old
this precious prose; meaning deep
forever in my heart, i'll keep
bob, this is beautiful...simple beautiful... excellent write... blessings... michele |
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Re: Transcendental Talent
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by Wrybod on
Wednesday, 2nd July 2003 @ 12:22:41 PM AEST
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Michele, I've been missing you greatly
not seeing so much of you lately
I assume your problems still demand
that you are needed to lend a hand
My problem is I've singled out
one of several I rave about
like Val and nessa and 'specially you
methinks I have some more to do.
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Re: Transcendental Talent
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by Wrybod on
Wednesday, 2nd July 2003 @ 12:31:09 PM AEST
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The bus is there
the ride is free
there's plenty room for you and me
It's like a trip to wonderland
so let her take us by the hand
relax, enjoy (she'll understand) |
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