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Kill Me Again
Contributed by
TeenageEmoGirl
on
Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 11:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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A killer portrayed as a victim
Your own corruption cries for justice
A victim, you grin a guiltless smile at your assassin
But you're the one with the blood-stained hands
Preaching your pain as you take the stand
But no one sees your cuts, or bruises, or wounds
They turn to me, your killer, and see,
With my head to my knees, begging you please,
To kill me once again.
Your attack on me, unknown and unheard
A midnight confession for all to judge
Of murder, of lust, of a broken trust,
Of my broken heart, of your fatuous grudge.
I pull my head up and show them the scar
From where you pulled my heart out,
Still beating, still bleeding, your story misleading
So shocking a scandal
Your prints on the knife's handle
Used to kill whatever was left of me at all
As I fall to my knees, begging you please
To kill me once again.
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TeenageEmoGirl
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2003-06-21 11:05:00]
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Re: Kill Me Again
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by norm on
Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 11:18:05 AM AEST
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You've done a nice job of poetry
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Thrill 'em and kill 'em
The boor does perform
Forgive 'em, re-live 'em
This interesting worm |
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Re: Kill Me Again
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by ruby_star_angel on
Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 11:18:28 AM AEST
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| I understand this poem all to well. I have been in that position, and still can't leave it behind. This poem really reached out to me. I sure hope you are having a better time coping with this. |
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Re: Kill Me Again
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by punkwthn on
Sunday, 22nd June 2003 @ 02:40:05 AM AEST
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| I can completely relate to this poem. Trust me, there are better guys out there! Your poem was very well-written and the imagery was great. Good poem. Hang in there! |
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Re: Kill Me Again
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by Trisha on
Monday, 23rd June 2003 @ 07:19:07 PM AEST
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| I Like This And I Think It's Long Though. Keep Up The Good Work |
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Re: Kill Me Again
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by ArdRi79 on
Monday, 23rd June 2003 @ 08:58:12 PM AEST
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I really like the imagery you used here, whatever about the scumbag that did this to you it gave you fire to write a really great poem,
P.S. dont shed tears on an ass like this guy, if he doesnt care what kinda guy is he.
*puts his nose back in his own business* |
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Re: Kill Me Again
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 11:16:38 AM AEST
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I just went thru all your poems, trying to find one I havent already commented on (I'm bored!!!) and I thought 'dang I've commented on them all lol' then I found this one. Great write ash
luv stacey |
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