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Just let me die
Contributed by
hurthurthurt
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Sunday, 22nd June 2003 @ 08:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I am so sick and tired of this thing they call a 'life'
I wish someone would come along and stab me with a knife
They say that I am selfish, I have to wonder why
They're the ones who let me hurt, who will not let me die
I hate my life, and that won't change, so why should I stay here?
Why live a life where happiness is soon erased with tears?
They don't know what it's like, to live in so much pain
To live a life without the sun- a life with only rain
I've tried to fight, but every time, it gets too much for me
It's not easy to pretend I'm from a happy family
Each day I'm forced to live, behind this false disguise
But they all know I'm differnt, they can see it in my eyes
How am I supposed, to be honest with my friends
If every time the truth comes out; the friendship always ends?
I am not deaf, I am not blind, and yes: I have a heart
Of course I hear the words they say: they're tearing me apart
I know that there's no use in even trying to explain
Just how bad it hurts, for they can't understand my pain
I do not need another to tell me that I'm wrong
To tell me to get over it, to stand up and be strong
If only they could see, the pain that's kept inside
Understand my hurt, see the many tears I've cried
Maybe then they'd understand just why I feel this way
That death's my only option to make it go away.
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2003-06-22 20:05:00]
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Re: Just let me die
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 22nd June 2003 @ 08:31:15 PM AEST
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this brings me back in time about a year ago. This touched me deeply I can relate so much. Death is not your only option hopefully soon u can realize it life WILL get better it always does. Stick it out and write stuff like this. This was really solid wow... good stuff.
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Re: Just let me die
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by norm on
Sunday, 22nd June 2003 @ 09:01:32 PM AEST
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The poem is well written...
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If I had a choice and a vote that I could voice
I would vote that I would last til the absolutely last
I would then proceed to yell, like a real resounding yell
then they'll look at me again and they'll see I'm over ten. and that I'm sure, sure, sure!
And they better pay the piper 'cause I'm mad, mad, mad!
They had better pay my dues...and I'm broke
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Re: Just let me die
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 23rd June 2003 @ 12:16:45 AM AEST
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Another very touching write.... I can't pretend to know what you're feeling, but from your poems, I have a good idea...hope it gets better for you....
Hugs
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Re: Just let me die
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by afraid_of_fear on
Monday, 23rd June 2003 @ 05:07:39 PM AEST
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| oh.. this is... so so beautiful... it's made me cry... |
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Re: Just let me die
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by PhantomsLDY on
Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 10:15:02 PM AEST
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| I have been in a similar situation in my life and the only advice I can give you is that life's trials either make you stronger, make you a victim, or a statisic and it's up to you to decide which. If you decide to be a survivor then nothing anyone does can stop you. great write keep it up. |
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Re: Just let me die
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by PhantomsLDY on
Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 10:16:09 PM AEST
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| I have been in a similar situation in my life and the only advice I can give you is that life's trials either make you stronger, make you a victim, or a statisic and it's up to you to decide which. If you decide to be a survivor then nothing anyone does can stop you. great write keep it up. |
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Re: Just let me die
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by dreadfulsuicide1570 on
Saturday, 2nd August 2003 @ 11:06:11 AM AEST
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| I know how you feel. And i know i hate it when i am going through ruff times and people say they understand but they really havent a clue. so im not going to say i know exactly how you feel becuase i probably don't, but i've felt that feeling before. Its like an emptiness consuming my soul. That Poem really spoke to me and although i know from experience that what it is your trying to do it bad, its good your honest about it at least with your self. just try not to do anything that you and most others who care will regret because it seems you have a wonderful talent. |
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Re: Just let me die
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by dreadfulsuicide1570 on
Saturday, 2nd August 2003 @ 11:06:20 AM AEST
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| I know how you feel. And i know i hate it when i am going through ruff times and people say they understand but they really havent a clue. so im not going to say i know exactly how you feel becuase i probably don't, but i've felt that feeling before. Its like an emptiness consuming my soul. That Poem really spoke to me and although i know from experience that what it is your trying to do it bad, its good your honest about it at least with your self. just try not to do anything that you and most others who care will regret because it seems you have a wonderful talent. |
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Re: Just let me die
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by tifrob on
Tuesday, 14th October 2008 @ 10:46:13 AM AEST
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Why do you hurt so? I guess I'm the only one
here that does not understand. I know hurt &
pain just like everyone else. I know depression.
But, I don't know this kind of pain. Your words convey
your desperateness & emptiness. So your poem did it's job, it
captured you. You hollow ~ Yet, felling pain.
Good luck,
~Me~ |
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