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Erselan
Contributed by
vincy
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Monday, 23rd June 2003 @ 04:05:00 AM in AEST
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He was a lunatic!
undisciplined, undependable
unreliable, untrustworthy.
Why he was the last thing
one would wish for a friend.
Outrageous, hilarious at times
a cheat, a spoiler a troublemunger.
I loved the motherfuctor
he was too much!
The heart has a reason
that reason don't know.
He wasn't made for
a slow grind
like a wild comet
burnt out going
from here to oblivion.
He was always bugging me
about his confused life
last I saw him
he asked me to write
his life story
not the past
just the future
so he could act it out.
' Go to Hell ! ' I said
he must have
played it out
joined the army
got wasted
bled my heart
here's to him.
Copyright ©
vincy
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2003-06-23 04:05:00]
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Re: Erselan
(User Rating: 1 )
by norm on
Monday, 23rd June 2003 @ 05:17:54 PM AEST
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If I wrote a poem like this, I'd put my name
in bigger letters saying, "I'm here!"
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i'll bet a wad..had you written as he asked
you'd write him sitting on sand of beach,
while puffing pipe in sun he basked
with arm out-stretched a cloud to reach
to catch a tern, the bird beseach
blood-letting by some sanguine leach |
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Re: Erselan
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by Fenril(_a.k.a_ZTAP) on
Friday, 18th July 2003 @ 07:37:35 PM AEST
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