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Dead Office Parallel
Contributed by
flirtyrockstar
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Tuesday, 24th June 2003 @ 10:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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White reflections on black tile
Watch you wash away against the floor
We'll miss you here
With acid tears to sear the coffee cups
We hold in our hands
Plastered in chalk dust
I wrote your name a hundred times
>Against these walls
And spun endlessley in the room's center
Calling your name to the hanging light
>Above my head
It never brought you back
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2003-06-24 10:05:00]
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Re: Dead Office Parallel
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 24th June 2003 @ 10:48:34 AM AEST
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Wow!! I really like this is powerful and emotional!Keep it up.
Michelle |
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Re: Dead Office Parallel
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by tease_whizz on
Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 01:50:17 PM AEST
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| i really like this - the images are great and it is well written and simple in style. it makes me feel like i can relate to it. great write, keep them coming, Kate x |
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