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Eye play
Contributed by
vincy
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Wednesday, 25th June 2003 @ 02:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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The puppet had no more than two eyes. To the ordinary person a right & a left eye to you and me and to all makers and discoverers an interior & an exterior eye. To those who demand further information... an eye which saw from the tip of his nose to the distant stars another eye which saw what was within... from the tip of his memory to the sparkle deep in his dreams. As for the puppet to him there was just one eye. The meeting point of two cycles where horizons curve into each other where the eye is the sparkle and the sparkle the star. With this eye the puppet played towards this eye the puppet flowed. The eye which was his cultivated potentials the meaning of his never ending search. Fulfillment contentment tranquility. As the passing years carved wrinkles into his face the eyes would get closer to each other until the day when right at the center of his forehead where his eyebrows met the eyes would eclipse and like a cyclone the puppet would make 'eeeeenormous sounds of joy' .
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Re: Eye play
(User Rating: 1 ) by norm on
Wednesday, 25th June 2003 @ 03:17:26 PM AEST (User
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Your poem makes absolute sense and
not only sensible but also defensible
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Let me say in four short lines,
we are all just puppet size,
but like a cyclops, depth perception
blurs our questing eyes.
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Re: Eye play
(User Rating: 1 ) by Saira on
Wednesday, 25th June 2003 @ 03:59:10 PM AEST (User
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Good write! |
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