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If Only.....
Contributed by
kangarose
on
Wednesday, 25th June 2003 @ 05:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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If only things weren't so complex,
With the way you look at life,
If only things were easier,
And you were by my side.
If only we could always be,
The way we want to be,
If only i didn't move away,
We'd be together now.
If only I could see your face,
Every single day,
Instead of only once a month,
Cause thats the way it is right now.
If only you would lose that job,
Move to the country with me,
For city life has an effect on me,
Makes me restless and uneasy.
If only there was a way,
To rid you of that car,
Then there would be a lot less stress,
Between the two of us.
If only there was a way,
For you to realize my hurts and pains,
You always tell me what i do wrong,
And how I am at fault.
If only you could understand,
A relationship is a two way street,
You have to have some give and take,
And try to understand.
If only you would realize,
Just how much I Love You,
And be the free spirit,
That i know you really are.
Copyright ©
kangarose
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2003-06-25 17:25:00]
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Re: If Only.....
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by ziggy on
Wednesday, 25th June 2003 @ 05:50:13 PM AEST
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| heartfelt... really touching |
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Re: If Only.....
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by punkwthn on
Wednesday, 25th June 2003 @ 06:02:33 PM AEST
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| I really enjoyed reading this poem. You could feel the emotions expressed. Well done = ) |
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Re: If Only.....
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 25th June 2003 @ 08:10:41 PM AEST
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well written
Shari |
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Re: If Only.....
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by Kay-P-M-Devenish on
Wednesday, 25th June 2003 @ 09:05:59 PM AEST
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This poem is packed full of emotion and longing.
An excellent poem.
Hugs from
kay
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I missed your poetry. |
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Re: If Only.....
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by Wrybod on
Friday, 27th June 2003 @ 05:42:17 AM AEST
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Now look what you've done! Here I am so taken up with your heartfelt problem, sitting here not knowing what to say.
A lesser poem I would have ignored and passed on but you write so well one feels
one should do or say something that might help.
But I can't think of anything. The most difficult thing in the world is trying to change another persons mind. |
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Re: If Only.....
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by S_K_Williamson on
Monday, 15th September 2003 @ 10:00:34 AM AEST
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Hi there!!!! I am so glad to know who you are now! I missed you. I loved this poem, it made me really feel it. I have a poem of the very same name...imagine that!
Excellent write my friend,
Sharon;) |
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