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daddy
Contributed by
tinka_belle
on
Wednesday, 25th June 2003 @ 08:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Dont touch me where I dont want to be touched
Dont make me hate you very much
Dont lay me down and say its right
Dont make me dread the night
Dont make me feel like I want to cry
Dont make me want to lay down and die
Dont make me carry your secret to the grave
Dont tell me that Im very brave
Dont say that mummy is not to know
Dont take me to places I dont want to go
Dont give me what I dont deserve
Dont say that I need to, I have to learn
Dont come home drunk and slam the door
Dont keep going when I say no more
Dont push me around and hold me tight
Dont let the moon be the light
Dont tell me daddy knows the best
Dont say you love me and this is a test
Dont make me touch you way down there
Dont say you're doing this because you care
Dont hit me when I start to cry
Dont tell me I am doing it right
Dont make me want to hit you hard
Dont leave me with all these scars
Dont say if I tell, you'll have to leave
Dont put all the blame on me
Dont make me whisper and scared to speak
Dont make my future look very bleak
Dont make my life a living hell
Dont tell me that I do this well
Dont make me want to run away
Dont tell me that I have to stay
Dont smile when you hold my hand
Dont play with me in the sand
Dont rub up against me and hold me down
Dont go deeper when I turn around
Dont try new things and make me bleed
Dont show me things I dont want to see
Dont tell me I love you and I always will
Dont push me against the windowsill
Dont say this is a journey, which I should enjoy
Dont say its like my special toy
Dont lie when they ask you what you've done
Dont say I'm a liar and made it all up
Dont look and me and say nothing at all
Dont tell them that I'm just a silly little girl
Dont look in their eyes and say its not something I would do
Dont make them cry when I tell them the truth
Dont look so sorry when you say you were wrong
Dont say you didn't realise it went for so long
Dont deny me of my childhood years
Dont say my screams you did not hear
Dont keep the memories in your head
Dont lay me down on your bed
Dont turn around when I ask you to stay
Dont accept my apology when I say its ok
Dont wonder what I'm doing when you're lonely at night
Dont make me say what you did was right
Dont look out the window and see nothing but pain
Dont try and do it again
Dont shave your beard and try to be strong
Dont make me feel bad for telling my mum
Dont wish upon a star that I could forgive
Dont tell me that I should try and live
Dont touch me where I dont want to be touched
Dont make me hate you very much
Dont lay me down and say its right
Dont make me dread the night
Dont hurt me when you push too hard
Dont reach out to me through the bars
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Re: daddy
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by Sapphire on
Thursday, 26th June 2003 @ 12:37:18 AM AEST
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| Oh how terribly sad, but how incredibly full of emotion and truth. This is a very powerful poem. I had some experiences with family members and felt exactly this. I am truly touched. |
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Re: daddy
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by Valkyra on
Thursday, 26th June 2003 @ 01:25:17 AM AEST
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| very, very good poem. I'm on the verge of tears. It must have been terrible. Please, continue to PM me. I'd like it very much. |
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Re: daddy
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 26th June 2003 @ 03:13:41 AM AEST
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| This is a truly sad poem. I am so sorry if you had to go thru this and it is so awful that parents feel the need to do this to their own children. It is a terrible crime and so sad for young children to go thru this pain brought on by their own parents. A heart wrenching but amazing write. |
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Re: daddy
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 28th June 2003 @ 03:25:20 AM AEST
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this was very sad and you portray the horror of being sexually abused by a monster... very well. This musta been tough to write since it was tough for me to read. I hope you can forgive though... since through forgiveness brings healing.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: daddy
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by Jason_Robert_Britt on
Tuesday, 1st July 2003 @ 02:21:20 AM AEST
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| WoW, I think I'm in system shock as old memories come rushing back to my mind. I want to say that hating him and hurting him and yelling at him, and writing about him, and telling on him, and arresting him will make it all go away( You should be strong and have him put in jail for what he did...if you can... he needs to really understand that he was wrong... and you should voice yourself and your feelings, never be afraid to speak your mind).... but none of that will ever replace what was stolen from you. Please remember that you can find strength in others, the most needed help is often found in the weirdest of places and from the most unexpecting people. This world is made up of experiances... some good, some bad, some just down right evil.... some more joyous then even being alive itself.... but through it all... we still have eachother... all you have to do is look. My sincerest blessings. |
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Re: daddy
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by Trisha on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 11:41:55 PM AEST
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| I can say rape is so wrong that people need to pay what they did. I wish I could say that if I could go back I would put a guy in jail. My dad would kill him if he ever find out that this older guy had raped me. I was 12 and he was 28. I was two scared to say anything to anyone. The only person that knows any thing is my mom. I wish I could tell my dad but I feel to shame to say anything |
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