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Heavily Hurt
Contributed by
Sapphire
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Friday, 27th June 2003 @ 02:45:00 AM in AEST
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HEAVILY HURT
I've had it to here with your sherry and beer,
You drink like a fish every night.
Well I hope in disgust that your bladder will bust,
I hate you - stay out of my sight.
The pain that you've put this family through
Shows signs of breaking in two.
The stress and the strain of a love that you've slain
Will end with the downfall of you.
You steal and you cheat, won't accept defeat,
Well, your number's up at last.
I have my pride - I'm not on your side,
You're just a thing of the past.
My family and I share a love that is deep,
I won't let you take that away.
It's too late to regret - I'll see you hang yet,
You've gone too far and you'll pay.
You are no more the man I adored,
No longer my father, nor other,
Now, to me, you will only be,
The man who married my mother.
Sue
Copyright ©
Sapphire
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2003-06-27 02:45:00]
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Re: Heavily Hurt
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by shelby on
Friday, 27th June 2003 @ 03:01:45 AM AEST
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wow this poem hit home to me. Well written on a tuff subject.
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Re: Heavily Hurt
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by venkat on
Friday, 27th June 2003 @ 03:21:02 AM AEST
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| Really heart moving.. venkat |
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Re: Heavily Hurt
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by DreamWeaver on
Friday, 27th June 2003 @ 03:36:54 AM AEST
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| Great poem ... really well written ... Jan |
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Re: Heavily Hurt
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by LovingWhispers on
Friday, 27th June 2003 @ 03:44:45 AM AEST
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| This is a very intense write.Your feelings were/are justified but I'm so happy you are able to at least be ok with him now. :) |
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Re: Heavily Hurt
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 27th June 2003 @ 05:36:46 AM AEST
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How true to the feelings of someone who lived with a drunken parent, very good write
Shari |
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