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The abysm of silence
Contributed by
venkat
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Friday, 27th June 2003 @ 06:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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While my heart is breaking into pieces
Why dont you have mercy upon me?
When my eyes are dripping tears of blood
Why are you silent, O God?
Have you no time and leisure to listen my cry?
For whose sake thou art existent?
For whose sake thou hast created the world?
Art thou really existent?
If thou art, is there no place
for compassion in thy heart?
Why hast you created me as a man?
Why hast you chained me with fetters
of the world like wife and children?
Why hast you destroyed my hopes and
Wrought me pain in the hands of deception?
Why hast you imprisoned me in this body
And nailed me on a cross of suffering?
As my life is turning into darkness
Grief is dancing like death on my heart and
My heart is now crushed into pieces, pieces
Why are you looking at me so cold?
Where is your mercy? Where is your love?
If your heart is a stone, then turn me into a stone
No, I dont want this life on earth; decide it now
Whether you turn me into a stone or you take
My life and merge my soul into thy infinite light
Or you hush me into thy dark abysm of silence!!
24-6-2003
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venkat
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2003-06-27 18:05:00]
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Re: The abysm of silence
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 27th June 2003 @ 06:09:18 PM AEST
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I feel great sadness reading this my friend.
Shari |
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Re: The abysm of silence
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by norm on
Friday, 27th June 2003 @ 08:36:25 PM AEST
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A poem of great depth
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A poem so dark, yet, you are able to mark
a light from the heart, so bright, the spark
well, who made the light and the spark, Hark!
It was the mark of the poet, himself....
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Re: The abysm of silence
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by DreamWeaver on
Friday, 27th June 2003 @ 10:30:53 PM AEST
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| This poem touched me very deeply .... I feel these feelings very often and cried a million tears when I read this - a great outpouring of pain ... take care my friend .... Jan |
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Re: The abysm of silence
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by venkat on
Saturday, 28th June 2003 @ 04:55:06 AM AEST
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Dear Norm.. your comment is wonderful.. gives a great relief to me..and the spark is now turning into a flame again.. thank you.
dear Sharon..
please don't be upset..I am now O.k. sorry for sharing my sadness..
dear Jan,
please don't cry..i have unnecessarily caused you more grief..i am very sory..
I am alright.. thank you all
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Re: The abysm of silence
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by kalika_vidya on
Sunday, 29th June 2003 @ 10:28:00 AM AEST
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| I am very sorry..and I am unable to comment except to shed tears.. |
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Re: The abysm of silence
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by karoody on
Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 06:07:40 AM AEST
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this one surprised me...very dark compared to your usual...you write it well...so sad...BUT NEVER APOLOGIZE FOR SHARING GRIEF!!!!...when you have emotions like that, it is best to get them out...furthermore, no one can deny the talent and passion here...it is a treasure, don't apologize for it...
hugs
your friend
kara
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Re: The abysm of silence
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by chandramohan on
Monday, 28th July 2003 @ 07:15:18 AM AEST
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wonderful poem.
it really touches my heart.
chandramohan.. |
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Re: The abysm of silence
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by Tanna on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 09:48:20 AM AEST
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Sorrow, anguish and desolation pour from this write. This poem was incredible.
~T |
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