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Night Star
Contributed by
Lone_er
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Saturday, 28th June 2003 @ 06:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Night Star
When I was in darkness
Lost and staggering around
I saw the light of your love
Knew I was found
Like a star exploding
Hope flared into the night
And the path was revealed
Leading to the light
On and on thru the darkness
Side by side we walked our way
Until the light of the morning
Slowly faded you away
Now I walk in the light
And memory of your love
Searching the blue sky
For your light up above
And I know in my heart
Should I fall from the light
A star is ready
To save me from the night
Russ
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Re: Night Star
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by addie on
Saturday, 28th June 2003 @ 08:36:32 AM AEST
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very good write as usual....especially the lines ..
"Now I walk in the light
And memory of your love
Searching the blue sky
For your light up above"
very well written .. |
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Re: Night Star
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by Lone_er on
Saturday, 28th June 2003 @ 08:40:47 AM AEST
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| Thank you Addie and thank you for taking the time to read it.--Russ |
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Re: Night Star
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 28th June 2003 @ 09:27:02 AM AEST
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as always you have shown us the light through you poetry ,,, your talent always shines bright
Shari |
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Re: Night Star
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by LovingWhispers on
Saturday, 28th June 2003 @ 09:27:39 AM AEST
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| I read this and see many colours...beautiful soft colours.Though it is very sad...it is still so very lovely.Im just about to go to sleep here in oz and Im very happy to have decided to read one more ;)...So tenderly written and so I will tenderly drift.Excellent! |
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Re: Night Star
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by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 29th June 2003 @ 03:42:49 AM AEST
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| Soft and romantic ... a lovely write ... Jan |
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