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Mr. Wrong or Right
Contributed by
Forever_Dream
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Saturday, 28th June 2003 @ 08:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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When I first met you
I felt no attraction
No expression
No satisfaction
I never thought that it would someday be
Now and maybe always you and me
I didnt know what to do
To be with you or leave
So I decided that were meant to be
And you said you liked me
Now we are together
Forever maybe
But I still dont know
If we are meant to be
People tell me youre not that great
They want me to get a clue
They say youre just a perv
Who likes to smoke and chew
I try to take your side
Every chance I get
I might lose friends along the way
But well be together yet
People say you get a crush
On every girl you meet
Whether shes freaking hot
Or just extremely sweet
I hope Im not just another girl
For you to use then leave
I pray to God youre not like that
You just seem too sweet
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Re: Mr. Wrong or Right
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 28th June 2003 @ 10:30:21 PM AEST
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good write, but unfortunately most times your friends are right.
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Re: Mr. Wrong or Right
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by Trisha on
Sunday, 29th June 2003 @ 01:55:29 AM AEST
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| I'LL SAY THAT FRIENDS ARE ALWAYS THERE WHEN YOU NEED THEM. GUY'S COME AND GO BUT REMEMBER THAT FRIENDS ARE ALWAYS THERE WHEN YOU NEED A HAND |
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Re: Mr. Wrong or Right
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by Saira on
Wednesday, 2nd July 2003 @ 06:34:25 PM AEST
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True friends always guide you to the right path. It's a very good write and well expressed. Well done!
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