|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
A brokenheart's promise
Contributed by
hermoiii
on
Saturday, 28th June 2003 @ 11:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
|
i will never write another ryhme
nor make a tune out of time
i will never try to love again
coz it just brought me a lasting rain
i will never try to bloom in may
i might just wither in winter's vain
i will never search for that one grain
for i dont want to feel these myriad pain
and most of all i will never attempt to try
coz i dont want to see myself fall again and die
Copyright ©
hermoiii
... [
2003-06-28 23:35:00]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: A brokenheart's promise
(User Rating: 1 )
by ArdRi79 on
Sunday, 29th June 2003 @ 05:39:07 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| I like the images you use, it is short but it makes an impact it is one of the better poems ive read here |
|
|
Re: A brokenheart's promise
(User Rating: 1 )
by hermoiii on
Tuesday, 1st July 2003 @ 07:31:58 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| tnx ardi79... im very much happy for what you've just commented... thank you and i'll keep on doing more of my poems |
|
|
Re: A brokenheart's promise
(User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 01:51:56 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| great flow and style, vivid images i see within' your poetry, write on, hugs n' love nessa |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
