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Lets go back to the start
Contributed by
youngpoet1989
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Sunday, 29th June 2003 @ 12:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Lets take a few steps back
and retrace our lives
Lets rewind what happened today
and go back to the good days
back to the laughter and joy
Lets go back to the start
and change the mistakes we have made
Lets take back all the things we said
and restart our lives in a better way
I just want to go back to the start
and take away what happened today
and all the mistakes that we have made
Lets go back to the start
Back so far before all this had happened
Lets retrace our lives once again.
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2003-06-29 00:05:00]
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Re: Lets go back to the start
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 29th June 2003 @ 05:52:04 AM AEST
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A really good write, I really liked it, I had to read it over about 3 times cos my sis talked to me half way thru and it just threw me off the whole wavelength the poem was on. Good work!
luv stacey |
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Re: Lets go back to the start
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by Sapphire on
Sunday, 29th June 2003 @ 06:47:43 AM AEST
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| Nice write. I'd like to go back a few steps sometimes too. |
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Re: Lets go back to the start
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by LovingWhispers on
Tuesday, 1st July 2003 @ 07:04:05 AM AEST
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Yeah I agree...But just a few steps cause you just might fall off the dge lol..Although the freefall would be awesome...the landing could hurt.
Well said. :) |
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