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Everlasting Love
Contributed by
azzouz
on
Tuesday, 1st July 2003 @ 06:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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close to the door
he paused to stand
as he took his class ring
off her hand
all who were watching
did not speak
as a silent tear
ran down his cheek
and through his mind
the memories ran
of the moments they walked
and laughed in the sand
but now her eyes were so terribly cold
for he would never again have her to told
they watched in silence
as he bent near
and whispered the words...
"i love you dear"
he touched her face and started to cry
as he put on his ringand wanted to die
and just then the wind began to blow
as they lowered her casket into the snow
this is what happens to true love
it will last to reach heaven up above.
Copyright ©
azzouz
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2003-07-01 06:35:00]
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Re: Everlasting Love
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by stargazer on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 05:43:40 PM AEST
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That was amazing! I know... like, I've read that somewhere or maybe I've just read this poem before and not commented. But either way... breath taking.
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