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Goodbye baby
Contributed by
azzouz
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Tuesday, 1st July 2003 @ 07:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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here i am alone standing
looking for something to do
here i am my love i'm sending
this time i feel it's true
i miss you baby, i really do
i wonder if u feel the same way too
i love you in every word
too bad...we're heading to the worst
really i hate this situation
i looked for the best
as for some reconciliation
i'm puttig you to the test
show me that you care
for pain i can no longer bare
and perhaps if you don't
seeing me again, you won't
i'm not waisting my time anymore
for your love i will ask no more
even if i miss you so
life is calling me also
together, we're not meant to be
for your love stinks like a bee
and because i don't want to lie
it's time for me to tell you goodbye
you waisted the love that i sent
so plz dont ask me to be your friend
i'm leaving, i'm really sorry
i've sacrificed a lot, end of the story.
Copyright ©
azzouz
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2003-07-01 07:05:00]
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Re: Goodbye baby
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st July 2003 @ 12:16:11 PM AEST
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"love stinks like a bee"
Now do bees really stink??? lol
Or is it sting?
Ahhhh..... I think this is a really nice poem,
but I feel sorry for the heart thats being
broken by such poetic words.
Lovely style of writing!
Angel always.....godspeed! joni |
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Re: Goodbye baby
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by Hiddendarkness1705 on
Sunday, 3rd August 2003 @ 07:17:07 PM AEST
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Emotional. Sweet. Excellent
~Stacie~ |
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Re: Goodbye baby
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by gina on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 04:16:53 PM AEST
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| loooooooool stinks!hhaah walla da77akni hayda yalli ntabah hehehe anyway i loved this one , i liked the abab rhymes,bta3ref chou,lezem ana wiyyek lezem nrou7 show our poems la miss mary heheh dont u think ? |
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