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Broken Dreams
Contributed by
lovingangel4u
on
Tuesday, 1st July 2003 @ 12:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I dont want to give you pain or
Hurt your heart too.
Or make you feel your lifes been a waste
Because of any hell I put you through.
You say I love you and
in your heart its true.
But you just dont remember the
heartache you put me through.
The tears I cried the yelling and abuse I heard
I just dont understand how you think thats absurd.
To you its all over and it doesnt happen much anymore,
You justify it will a shrug, it was nothing, no less no more.
But emotions arent that strong to survive years of this,
How do I find the words to tell you my love no longer exists?
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lovingangel4u
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2003-07-01 12:05:00]
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Re: Broken Dreams
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by norm on
Tuesday, 1st July 2003 @ 01:06:17 PM AEST
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Your poem tells it all
no reason to bawl
seems that you're right
in ending the fight
anyway, it's your call
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Re: Broken Dreams
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 1st July 2003 @ 01:56:09 PM AEST
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good write
Shari
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Re: Broken Dreams
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by vincy on
Tuesday, 1st July 2003 @ 02:54:59 PM AEST
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Well you found the words to write this poem
which answers the question which you pose
at the end of the poem.
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Re: Broken Dreams
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by outsider on
Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 05:48:16 AM AEST
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You write such excellent poetry, and this one is no different. It is an extremely powerful write. The only difference with this one is I wish you hadnt been in the situation where you had to write this poem
En riet en ahn ek tha gra agam orst gu bragh |
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