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total death
Contributed by
princesspurty
on
Tuesday, 1st July 2003 @ 12:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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paridise in the islands just off the coast
freedom from the things that bother you most
sea weed and sand await your touch
star gazing and romance and such
sharing a walk in the moon light
catching a sunrise just right
forgetting the rules that are no longer
makes your heart and soul grow stronger
shed your fear and take a breath
life without love, means total death
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princesspurty
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2003-07-01 12:35:00]
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Re: total death
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by norm on
Tuesday, 1st July 2003 @ 01:01:26 PM AEST
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your poem is well done
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who can deny that love is first rate
but make sure it doesn't turn into hate
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Re: total death
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 1st July 2003 @ 01:54:17 PM AEST
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good write
shari
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Re: total death
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by vincy on
Tuesday, 1st July 2003 @ 03:06:43 PM AEST
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ahh princess, a poem that says what is what
is surely enough to capture my heart.
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