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This is a HOLD UP!!!!!
Contributed by
vincy
on
Wednesday, 2nd July 2003 @ 08:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
sarcasticpoetry
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Double barrel poem staring you in the face
FREEZE!.. Stop what you're doing,
short of breathing,
follow my instructions carefully...
I have itchy fingers
my pen is loaded with ink
which stains permanently,
soon after you read this
your eyelids will get heavy
you may have a dizzy spell,
that's expected.
You are at my mercy now
so just get ready
to give up all your posessions,
your life included.
I like to see some sweat, tears,
YEEES!! beg for mercy
any indication of fear enhances my powers
and no, you may not look into my eyes
I may brake into laughter & lose my disguise.
Copyright ©
vincy
... [
2003-07-02 08:35:00]
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Re: This is a HOLD UP!!!!!
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by norm on
Wednesday, 2nd July 2003 @ 10:40:16 AM AEST
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This site has some poets who have poems
I could read happily, all day. You are one...
and...you don't have to hypnotize me... |
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Re: This is a HOLD UP!!!!!
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 2nd July 2003 @ 11:02:38 AM AEST
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Your poems are always interesting and refreshing
Shari |
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Re: This is a HOLD UP!!!!!
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by buchi on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 11:53:00 AM AEST
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| Unsimplified (poetic) description of Mind attaining its realization...wonderful... |
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