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hungry
Contributed by
me
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Wednesday, 2nd July 2003 @ 11:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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misguided
small
naive
deluded
scarred
and hungry
lead me away
hide me
give me all i needed
don't deny my crime
feed me hope
i need you
all i wanted
to show my naked soul
for somebody to know me
all i want still
feed me life
i yearn for it
feed me love
i'm starving
guide my dreams
make me real
clean and cover all my wounds
appease my desolate soul
feed me hope
i need you
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2003-07-02 11:35:00]
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Re: hungry
(User Rating: 1 )
by vincy on
Wednesday, 2nd July 2003 @ 01:28:51 PM AEST
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this poem has a mesmerising quality
it flaws well, reaching out for help
it is moving, I'm touched!
by the way "give me all I need(ed)
" don't deny my crime " a bit vague,
what crime, your need? |
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