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Mommy Please Come Home
Contributed by
squeesh
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Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 12:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Every time I need you You're no where to be found When I want to be left alone Youre breathing down my neck I need you mommy But youre not here Im crying now And scared that you might be hurt I assume youre with friends Im stuck here alone Mommy please come home I miss all our great times The laughs and tears We used to hang out Now the house is my best friend Im taking care of myself Youre off having fun I leave to get away You ground me again Im sorry Im such a bad kid But maybe if you were around Id know right from wrong Im getting older now And pressures are greater I still need your guidance Even thought I dont ask I just want you to come back home So I know youre safe And I can feel you gentle touch another day longer But still youre not here I go to bed And sit there and listen For you footsteps I missed you again And youll never know The pain bottled inside Thats eating from within I love you mommy Please come home
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2003-07-03 00:05:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Mommy Please Come Home
(User Rating: 1 ) by Sapphire on
Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 07:02:31 AM AEST (User
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This breathes the need for help, love and attention that all children crave from their parents. Well written. It hits home. |
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Re: Mommy Please Come Home
(User Rating: 1 ) by PhantomsLDY on
Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 09:49:05 PM AEST (User
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As A mother this touches such a deeply sad note in my heart. It is beautifully written. |
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Re: Mommy Please Come Home
(User Rating: 1 ) by lostforgood on
Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 03:23:04 AM AEST (User
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This poem is so touching. It fits me so well....my mother often is gone and leaves me home, the empty house is my friend, the routine of waiting, listening, hoping for her has become much to known. Hold on tight to life, keep trying, please never give up.
~lost~ |
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