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Tears of Pain
Contributed by
squeesh
on
Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 12:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Tears of pain
Along with black rain
The stories that were told
Should sound so bold
The dark night
Always brings fright
The fears
The tears
Tears of pain
Nothing more to gain
The words keep hurting me
Theres too much I cant see
The bottomless hole
Takes my soul
The memories are burning my eyes
Its all too much to realize
The tears of pain
Are driving me insane
I cant get away
Youre forcing me to stay
Leave me alone
The rope snaps me bone
I scream with vain
These tears of pain
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squeesh
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2003-07-03 00:35:00]
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Re: Tears of Pain
(User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTearz on
Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 07:05:15 AM AEST
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| Good, really good.. 7 on my scale.. it's hard to write dark poetry and make it rhyme, it is for me,, which is why mine don't ehyme. |
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