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Lost In The Silence....
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
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Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 01:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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The glass pane of the bay window,holds her sighs as though of steam
Moist to the touch,she pauses,with her fingers on her dreams
Trailing down the window,are the many tiny drops of rain
She knows not to dance with sadness,yet her heart cannot refrain
Lace curtains drape the moment,as though framing a memory
A lonely time to reflect on,a time to remember,for eternity
In her hands there rests a rose,of gold and scarlet red
In her mind,there dances the words,of all that he once said
Her tired eyes are closed now,her wilted heart is torn
And in the darkness by the window,she sits in tears,forlorn
Softly down her cheeks they fall,warm trails on her face
As she recalls his loving smile and his tender hearts embrace
Outside the night is empty,it holds no beauty for her eyes
Unlike in times before,when storms brought forth her happy sighs
Now darkened sky and moonless night,takes her weary breath
And delivers all her hopes and dreams,to their final death
She turns within the silence,once more the tears they fall
As to the memory of her love,she does so softly call....
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LovingWhispers
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2003-07-03 13:05:00]
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Re: Lost In The Silence....
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 01:12:03 PM AEST
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breathtakingly beautiful
Shari |
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Re: Lost In The Silence....
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by norm on
Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 02:29:40 PM AEST
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It is a quality write to cover an awful plight
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When two people make a pledge
There just is no way to hedge,
Sooner or later
One is the waiter
The other is out on the 'ledge'.....
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Re: Lost In The Silence....
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 02:31:24 PM AEST
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| Wonderful, beautiful, romantic, deep feeling poem. thanks.............Mike |
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Re: Lost In The Silence....
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 03:31:41 PM AEST
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This one left me breathless.It flowed so
naturally into a sadness. Beautifully done!
Angel always.....godspeed....joni |
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Re: Lost In The Silence....
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by Suzy on
Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 07:41:30 PM AEST
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Another work of art for you dear lovingwhispers....
Lasca |
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Re: Lost In The Silence....
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 10:50:01 PM AEST
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I thought I was good but my work here lately doesn't compare to the poems I have so loved tonight. As a third one leaves me speachless, and yours with tears in my eyes. This is so good! Thanks for sharing!
juliette |
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Re: Lost In The Silence....
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by Crow on
Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 01:20:58 AM AEST
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o`my, i don`t think i have read something so tender as this in some time. the end of this
captures my heart. Crow |
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Re: Lost In The Silence....
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by The_Phantom on
Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 02:15:03 AM AEST
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So very deep, passionate, and painful, what else can I say but, I wish I could write like you. WOW!
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Re: Lost In The Silence....
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by DreamWeaver on
Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 12:55:48 AM AEST
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| Incredibly beautiful ... I am in awe of your writing ... Jan |
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Re: Lost In The Silence....
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by dafremen on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 05:38:12 PM AEST
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Can't help but feel as though the lovely words brush past me on their way to somewhere else. In many that I have read of yours, they seem to look back at you, wanting just a few moments more of your time and care. They flow effortlessly, delectably, then catch a snag left here or there. Like the occasional skip on a favorite old album, the song remains as beautiful, but the heart knows it could have been better. With respect, empathy and the best of intentions.
A fan,
Daf
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