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Hold me Daddy (A Father's Love)
Contributed by
eyesrustedshut
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Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 10:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
FathersDayPoems
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White wilted petals drift down and land on cold linoleum floor
It's evident she is tired but her yawn proves it even more
So restless she slowly makes her way to daddy's reach
The scent of her hair is that of lavender and peach
And as daddy picks her up he breathes her in
He can only think to himself being this loved must be a sin
Daddy's beautiful little girl reads him stories before bed
He tucks her in with a kiss on the cheek and a pat on the head
He wishes so much he could keep her forever this young
But not letting her grow is like a beautiful song unsung
Though boys pass through her life Dad knows he's her man
Then comes the day a gentleman asks for her hand
"Dad" she says "I'll always love you the same"
With watering eyes Dad proves his love by giving her away
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2003-07-03 22:35:00]
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Re: Hold me Daddy (A Father's Love)
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by LovingWhispers on
Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 11:10:34 PM AEST
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| ***wiping away tears*** How precious and this is EXACTLY how it must be.The way in which you captured this tells me that you are very in tune with others..taking in every feeling ,every action,and all the beauty of such moments...Just have to read this again..I love a good cry lol ;) |
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Re: Hold me Daddy (A Father's Love)
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 11:20:15 PM AEST
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also crying a very touching beautiful write,
great work
Shari |
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Re: Hold me Daddy (A Father's Love)
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by Crow on
Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 04:02:41 AM AEST
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what a wonderful effect this has on my heart.
Crow |
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