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Advent
Contributed by
ronald
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Thursday, 8th August 2002 @ 09:06:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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Advent of moment,
Taking descent,
From heaven,
In glorious splendour,
Of elegance,
So divine,
So alluring.
It is such,
A defining moment,
Within it,
Lies whispers,
Of angelic promises,
Though in an undertone,
It is sensual.
Now, watch the clovers,
Unfolding paradise,
Where lies aspiration
Where life is,
Soaked in blue...
Copyright ©
ronald
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2002-08-08 21:06:31]
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Re: Advent
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by norticus on
Friday, 9th August 2002 @ 03:03:01 AM AEST
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| This one was pretty cool. It's speed and imagery where well put together. I give it a 3.9 on the Nortiscale. |
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Re: Advent
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by Chrissie on
Sunday, 11th August 2002 @ 01:21:06 AM AEST
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This is beautiful Ronald!
Chrissie x |
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