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watery cascade
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 02:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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take me away upon a ship on the sea
where there will be only you, me, and
pretty shining water and sky above
where we might enkindle our love
i think of you with your happy eyes
this; our beautiful gift not to deny
you love sunshine, i love the rain
we're always different; ever same
hold me close beneath romantic moon
kiss me sweetly; hold me all afternoon
let me breathe you in along with salty air
heart against heart, as ocean we share
lost within' you
held beside you
birds in the sky
happy sighs...
our ocean never runs dry:)
will love being upon the seas with you
be skies sunny clear, or stormy blue
these feelings of beauty will not fade
falling into you like a watery cascade
*,,**,,**,,**,,**
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ladyfawn
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2003-07-04 14:35:00]
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Re: watery cascade
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 02:58:14 PM AEST
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ever beautiful, and I like the water theme, of course I just like the water anyway
Hugs
Shari |
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Re: watery cascade
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 03:14:07 PM AEST
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Another beautiful poem from a beautiful person.
Phil will love this Nessa, absolutely remarkable!!!
- Becca |
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Re: watery cascade
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by Crow on
Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 04:54:05 PM AEST
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| i agree with everyone, your work is very elegant and pleasing to read. Crow |
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Re: watery cascade
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 06:02:21 PM AEST
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Hey Grrl-friend, will you take me with you in your suitcase?? I won't be in the way, I promise....lol
Loved this ....
Huggers and woofies...
Jenni |
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Re: watery cascade
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by DreamWeaver on
Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 12:14:06 AM AEST
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| This is so peaceful .... a lovely romantic write ... Jan |
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Re: watery cascade
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by LovingWhispers on
Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 12:55:59 AM AEST
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***sighs*** Your writes always touch me so gently..This soothes the missing....Beautiful...and psst....you mushy thang you lol
Im so happy for you... x (((huge huggers))) |
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Re: watery cascade
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by MoonlitAngel on
Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 03:23:48 AM AEST
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"you love sunshine, i love the rain
we're always different; ever same"
Reminds me of someone... :)
Love it!
~ Moonlit |
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Re: watery cascade
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by shelby on
Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 01:55:13 PM AEST
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this is beautiful Nessa!! Thanks for sharing the images of water with me Im dreaming of it now. Damn desert just to dry lol
michelle |
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Re: watery cascade
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by norm on
Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 07:02:40 PM AEST
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I think Crow's a guy and so am I...
Your work is so deep, I become
envious because no female wrote
beautiful poems to me...I'm sure
I have a problem...I'd like the recipe
for so sweet a poem to give to the
next? in line... |
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Re: watery cascade
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by norm on
Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 07:02:41 PM AEST
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I think Crow's a guy and so am I...
Your work is so deep, I become
envious because no female wrote
beautiful poems to me...I'm sure
I have a problem...I'd like the recipe
for so sweet a poem to give to the
next? in line... |
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Re: watery cascade
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by norm on
Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 07:02:46 PM AEST
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I think Crow's a guy and so am I...
Your work is so deep, I become
envious because no female wrote
beautiful poems to me...I'm sure
I have a problem...I'd like the recipe
for so sweet a poem to give to the
next? in line... |
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Re: watery cascade
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 07:07:40 PM AEST
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HI,LADYFAWN,
YOUR WORDS ARE VERY MOVEING,VERY HEART FELT.
KEEP ON WRITING,YOUR VERY GOO,.NICE. |
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Re: watery cascade
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by princesspurty on
Wednesday, 9th July 2003 @ 07:33:03 PM AEST
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| very beautiful! |
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Re: watery cascade
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by Cynthia on
Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 06:37:00 PM AEST
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(((((((( hugs ))))))))
This is such a beautiful write Nessa.
You have done a perfect job on this.
I enjoy reading your writes.
Keep writing and I'll keep reading.
*S* Cynthia
P.S.
I'm back. I'm not going anywhere. :D |
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