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Your Mind,My Eyes...
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
on
Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 07:35:00 PM in AEST
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Like waters that course the mountains breast
Your words so gently flow
Replenishing faith within this heart
Helping the seed of my soul to grow
Across the miles you whisper
Like soft winds through the trees
And so I walk this mountain
To feel your gentle breeze
The sun ,with warmth it covers
Like a blanket around my skin
Wrapping me in tender light
Keeping me safe within
Your mind so like a rainbow
Magical,coloured bright
And blindness could not falter me
For your words would be my sight
From the waters I will drink of you
I will feel you on the breeze
And when I'm down and losing sight
It's your rainbow I will see
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LovingWhispers
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2003-07-05 19:35:00]
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Re: Your Mind,My Eyes...
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 07:42:10 PM AEST
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again a most wonderful well written piece
Sharon
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Re: Your Mind,My Eyes...
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 08:00:49 PM AEST
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Always your writes leave me with a sigh.....
Roses at your feet :o) (((( shar)))) |
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Re: Your Mind,My Eyes...
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 10:00:24 PM AEST
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my, my. i only hope to write this beautiful.
what a teriffic job you do. outstanding work.
Crow
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Re: Your Mind,My Eyes...
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 01:13:26 AM AEST
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I forgot to mention..that I love you and no one will ever drive a wedge between us. No lies will change our love for each other. I am called a fool for loving you...so a fool I am. One day we will be together and the happiness we have seached for will be ours.
I love you shar. |
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Re: Your Mind,My Eyes...
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by LovingWhispers on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 02:20:11 AM AEST
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Thank you Sweetheart...This is truly a test and we will see it through ..together..The lies and all the negatives..I hope..will only help to make us stronger...I love you very much...and thank you for loving me.
Some may say the distance makes it merely a fairytale,but if its a fairytale that gives my life love and hope,then I will gladly stay in wonderland with you...xxx |
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Re: Your Mind,My Eyes...
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 01:31:24 AM AEST
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| Never, never give up ... you are both the hope that keeps me believing in true love. You both write divine poetry and this one is as beautiful as all the others Sharon ... if there are any lies being said it will only weaken their character in time whoever they are ... but enhance the love you both have for each other and bring you closer together. Never give up on your dreams .... hugs and love Jan |
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