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my emotive poem
Contributed by
Lausa
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Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 08:35:00 PM in AEST
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dedicatedpoems
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Frustration is when no matter how hard you try it feels as though you can never do anything right. Stress is whenyou finally give up keeping everything bottled up inside so much that you just go off at anyone anytime for just doing the slightest thing that annoys you. Emptiness is when someone you love leaves you and makes you fell as if the whole world is against you. Peace is when you finally decide to stop holding a grudge against the world and decide to get on with life. Rage is when you think of all the terrorists out there who think funny is dropping a bomb { or something similar } and seeing people lose there life or the life a loved one. Pleasure is being able to lay down on the couch without any distruptions for an hour or so. Annoyance is when people have the guts to say something bad about a friend or you, but not having the guts to say it to you or your friends face, and then realising , that you can't do anything about it.
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Re: my emotive poem
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ilhar on
Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 08:43:02 PM AEST (User
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you had a lot of good points
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Re: my emotive poem
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 01:37:36 AM AEST (User
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I agree with Shari this is full of good points so true so true
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