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The Pitch-Black Day
Contributed by
Kittygurl
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Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 04:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I find myself in a pitch-black day
I look around and see nothing
However, I know it is day
But why is it pitch-black?
I cannot see anything
Then I wake up
Repent, and see the sun
All in a pitch-black day.
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Kittygurl
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2003-07-06 04:35:00]
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Re: The Pitch-Black Day
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 08:26:53 AM AEST
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Well written
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Re: The Pitch-Black Day
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by norm on
Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 07:18:30 PM AEST
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Shari is correct
you write a nice poem
Don't be ashamed
Don't run home |
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