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kiss away
Contributed by
LadyDama
on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 05:05:00 AM in AEST
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"kiss away"
was all she heard
through the shattered glass galore
"kiss away
i have no use
for a pitiful worthless whore"
~run away~
was what she did
footsteps echoing though the night
~run away
from this abyss
filled with terror and with fright~
(find a way)
whispered her soul
deep within her heart
(FIND A WAY
she stood up proud
ready for a new start)
but REMEMBER the day
(she can't forget)
that liberation took place
REMEMBER the day
lest she forget
and continue falling from her grace...
07/02/2003
Copyright ©
LadyDama
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2003-07-06 05:05:00]
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Re: kiss away
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by venkat on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 06:57:50 AM AEST
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| Very good that liberation taken place.. venkat |
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Re: kiss away
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 08:25:40 AM AEST
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Glad the strength was found too many don't get out
Shari |
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Re: kiss away
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 09:31:10 AM AEST
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| I am really sorry that you had to go through this, yet I am so happy that you escaped from it. If only more women had the courage you have, this world would hopefully not be filled with so much abuse. A good write, and once again I am happy that you got away from this, no-one deserves this pain. |
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Re: kiss away
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by wyrd_faerie on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 03:43:22 PM AEST
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| ah, beautiful, beautiful poetry...haven't seen you around here for a while...well done for getting away, no one deserves that, well done... |
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Re: kiss away
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by ForsakenSoul on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 05:22:57 AM AEST
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| A wonderful poem, the rhythm is great but I love the use of punctuation marks. A tool not used often enough, especially when you know the poem is going to be read and not heard. |
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