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To Say
Contributed by
rusty1980
on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 02:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Sitting in the evening sun
Some thoughts just take up my mind
Like the way you took my heart
And some words Im trying to find
To say Ill always be there
To say what you couldnt see
To say someone will always care
And that someone is Me
Shivering in the chill of the night
I long for so many things to say
If only you could show the light
But until I find a way
To say youre the only one
Who held a candle to my heart
And theres no place in the sun
For me to make a brand new start
Looking at your picture frame
I can hear your voice from far away
Oh everything elses just the same
Ever since you went away
To live in a world thats oh so far
Where the nights dont speak of me
If only I could wish upon a star
Id want you here close to me
Now sitting in the fading sun
I can feel my eyes fill up with tears
Theres so much more I wish Id done
Oh I long to kiss away your fears
And say Ill always be there
When youre oh so far to me
And say that I will still care
Wont you just let me be
To say it over and over again
Just how I miss you so
And theres nothing left but pain
As I had to watch you go.
Copyright ©
rusty1980
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2003-07-06 14:05:00]
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Re: To Say
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by Crow on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 02:13:18 PM AEST
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this is a very good poem, easy to read and it
flows. good work Crow |
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Re: To Say
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by Saira on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 03:27:24 PM AEST
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What a lovely write! Feelings that's so vivid and well expressed in your poem. Well done!
Saira |
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Re: To Say
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 03:41:18 AM AEST
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| A very lovely write ... Jan |
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