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-To Spare You-
Contributed by
gem48
on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 02:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Im falling
Spiralling out of control
Smashing into things
Destroying all I touch.
If I leave you now
Understand
Its for your own good
To spare you from hurt.
Im in control of my own destination
Fail or succeed
Its all up to me
I only hope that I dont
Drag you down with me.
If I leave you now
Understand
Its for your own good
To spare you from hurt.
Crashing back down to earth
Knife in my hand
Trying to end all
But is it what I want?
If I leave you now
Understand
Its for your own good
To spare you from hurt.
Its for your own good
To spare you from hurt
Copyright ©
gem48
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2003-07-06 14:35:00]
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Re: -To Spare You-
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by Saira on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 03:20:48 PM AEST
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Wow! It's so beautiful ... full of emotions. More look like a song to me. I loved it. Good work!
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Re: -To Spare You-
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by tease_whizz on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 03:52:29 PM AEST
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| these words would make great lyrics - they're powerful and emotive but with all the realism that makes them easy to relate to. the repetition is really effective. i know this feeling well - wanting to get away from someone in case you hurt them while you're self destructing. excellent write, keep them coming, Kate x |
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Re: -To Spare You-
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by shelby on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 07:03:18 PM AEST
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painfully sad but well written just the smae
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