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trapped on a vector
Contributed by
plous
on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 07:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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the flakeing of a soul,
sitting in the sun,
burnt frozen by things done,
dire to cheek and tounge,
a physical moment or noun,
collections of memories from certin moments,
come together like parts in a town,
still alive like people,
some painted like a clown,
some just depressed,
adding to why i am down,
logic and scripts,
tiny punches,
little hits,
with small fists and hands,
awake in a dream,
its a room with a toilet,
dimly lit with a tile floor,
how to escape,
i go to flush myself down,
Copyright ©
plous
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2003-07-06 19:35:00]
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Re: trapped on a vector
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 08:13:22 PM AEST
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I like your style, makes me think
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