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one true tale
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 12:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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so, as i lay here this night
and sweetly sigh of our past,
beauty this love has known
the arrows our love has cast,
*:~|~:*
whilst we are one and the same
do remember this one true tale,
my heart will always beat your name
true love will never fail.
*,,**,,**,,**,,**
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ladyfawn
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2003-07-07 00:05:00]
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Re: one true tale
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by shelby on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 12:58:22 AM AEST
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beautiful
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Re: one true tale
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by venkat on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 05:59:39 AM AEST
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| brief but beautifully written venkat |
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Re: one true tale
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 06:39:45 AM AEST
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well done my friend
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Re: one true tale
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by gina on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 04:53:38 PM AEST
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waw , been a long time since i commented on poems ,this one is really nice , loved it !
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Re: one true tale
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 07:07:59 PM AEST
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Aww hun this is so beautiful, left me speechless and you know thats hard ;)
- Becca |
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Re: one true tale
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by Crow on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 08:02:14 PM AEST
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what a pleasent thought to hang on too.
Crow |
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Re: one true tale
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by princesspurty on
Wednesday, 9th July 2003 @ 07:37:25 PM AEST
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| beautiful and very true to the point |
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Re: one true tale
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by Bongo on
Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 11:38:28 AM AEST
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A tale to be told
Of love we hold. |
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Re: one true tale
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by Cynthia on
Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 06:56:36 PM AEST
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Awww.
This is such a sweet write Ness.
*hug*
*S* Cynthia |
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Re: one true tale
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by yellow_sundragon on
Saturday, 12th July 2003 @ 12:44:46 AM AEST
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Nessa.... this is sooooo beautiful! Short and sweet.
Again, you have moved me with words...
*J* |
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Re: one true tale
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by vincy on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 03:15:48 PM AEST
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music to the ears
when words can give a hint
of friendships loyal backbone.
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Re: one true tale
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by vincy on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 05:38:53 PM AEST
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music to the ears
when words can give a hint
of friendships loyal backbone.
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Re: one true tale
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Thursday, 24th July 2003 @ 10:56:26 PM AEST
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| and since at night we watch the moon, and see the falling stars, the love that you express within can never be to far, this is so beautiful Nessa, short but right to the point, hugs and love to ya Val |
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Re: one true tale
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by xxmonstahxx on
Friday, 8th August 2003 @ 02:06:13 AM AEST
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| true love is a gift from heaven |
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