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Stronger than time
Contributed by
ladyfawn
on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 01:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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What of these feelings we hold
that make our hearts so bold
something so strong and true
you loving me, and me loving you,
My heart is light, as this poem i write
soon i will fly into the night
into your arms with only a smile
was sitting here wishing a while,
Return ticket to your heart in sydney
into your loving arms baby
the letter i sent with much love
was received before ever it was sent,
Whilst wishing to fly to you upon wings
in a breath you offered me these things
sweetheart im yours, and your mine
this love is stronger than time.
*,,**,,**,,**,,**
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ladyfawn
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2003-07-07 01:05:00]
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Re: Stronger than time
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 05:47:17 AM AEST
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| is this for your heyyo babe..?? you women always make the men fools,. |
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Re: Stronger than time
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 06:09:52 AM AEST
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| to guest, no lol! |
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Re: Stronger than time
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by LovingWhispers on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 06:12:54 AM AEST
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| Adorable :) You know I wish you all the happiness you deserve ,my friend,my walk through nature(((huggers))) |
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Re: Stronger than time
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by venkat on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 06:20:28 AM AEST
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I read the poem only as a friend poet.. Mr. Guest, I feel we have no right to hurt any body.. when she expresses some thing out of her heartfelt feelings let us enjoy her poetry.. what are you going to loss if you enjoy a poem. Dear Lady..the poem is O.k
you have expressed your feelings very nicely. venkat |
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Re: Stronger than time
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by LovingWhispers on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 06:23:41 AM AEST
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| hmmm...seems to me that men have no trubs doin it to themselves sometimes.lol..and us gals tend to be a lil foolish too...so on the whole I'd say we're all a lil foolish in the game of love...but if we're happy fools,then who really cares??? :D... |
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Re: Stronger than time
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 06:37:49 AM AEST
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Nessa,
I wish you much happiness
lovely poem
Shari
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Re: Stronger than time
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by norm on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 09:55:16 AM AEST
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This poem expresses the feelings of one
who loves and is loved..beautifully done
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A guest comes on with axe in hand
makes some noise to beat the band,
knows not where the people stand,
Kick him out and watch him land... |
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Re: Stronger than time
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 10:02:42 AM AEST
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G'day beautiful Nessa!
Such a joyous write girl that I thoroughly enjoyed.
I can hear your heart singing from here.
Love and hugz and best wishes,
fwog |
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Re: Stronger than time
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by vincy on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 01:07:24 PM AEST
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that loveletter which was received before sent
shows the sensitivity of the loves recipient
what a delightful poem of love, may it flourish. |
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Re: Stronger than time
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 07:11:36 PM AEST
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Awww Nessa, another fantastic...Brilliant...Beautiful write...your day is coming nearer...and i pray everynight for it to be closer
- Becca |
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Re: Stronger than time
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by spooky on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 05:23:04 AM AEST
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| well written with heart,,a friend in words,,spooky |
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Re: Stronger than time
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by Bongo on
Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 11:01:23 AM AEST
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Your message i hear
Your presence so near
In Sydney i wait
Have opened the gate
My feelings the same
This is not a game
Am counting the time
Your touch finally mine.
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Re: Stronger than time
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by Wrybod on
Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 11:11:44 AM AEST
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nessa, reading all the other comments on your lovely poem there's nothing left for me to say................except good luck.
Wrybod |
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Re: Stronger than time
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by xxmonstahxx on
Friday, 8th August 2003 @ 02:17:31 AM AEST
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| wow... lucky are you both to have a love so true |
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