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Sulking Sun
Contributed by
2timesX
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Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 05:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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We paint nails black
to remind us we don't love today.
Hopeless romantic is set in stone,
as she tears up to the sun.
She forever will search for the one
who'll set her straight.
And tell her she's suffered enough pain.
even if everything was okay.
She wants to watch,
him dream away.
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2timesX
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2003-07-07 17:05:00]
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Re: Sulking Sun
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by shelby on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 09:28:31 PM AEST
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lovely
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Re: Sulking Sun
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by tease_whizz on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 06:25:44 AM AEST
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| i love this. simply written but with depth of emotion and some powerful and emotive language. it has a lyrical feel to it. welcome to YPDC, hope to read more from you soon, Kate x |
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Re: Sulking Sun
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by Saira on
Wednesday, 9th July 2003 @ 09:45:12 AM AEST
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Beautifully written!
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Re: Sulking Sun
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st July 2003 @ 01:47:21 AM AEST
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Loverlyyyy!
I especially love this line:
"We paint nails black
to remind us we don't love today."
Stasi |
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Re: Sulking Sun
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 03:41:37 AM AEST
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| Hey, this is flatlandbob1. At the beginning of the poem you seem hopeless as to finding someone to love "hopless romantic is set in stone", but at the end you seem hopeful. This seems like you have clashing feelings. But what you may not realize is that where you are isn't the center of the world, there are lots of good people, you just have to find the right one. |
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