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anonymous (im still here)
Contributed by
fallensilence
on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 12:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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a child turns lonely as the day falls
and as days fall he cries out for someone
a child turns into a man and he's still wondering why he's so much like his father
the alcohol seems to help but every time he becomes more of what he hates
no one bothers to speak to him
how could they know that all he needs is to speak his mind
he surrounded by words of strangers
who claim to understand his wounds
its comforting at times
and at times its frustrating
because he knows they could never be there to hold him when he cries himself to sleep at night
he has a new found love for that numb feeling
caused by self medication
his facade of happiness keeps everyone at distance
its a pity that he could never ask for help.
he knows he is his father
he's scared
i wish i could change myself.
i wish i could change.
i dont want to have to feel numb to enjoy life.
theres always death to look forward to.
theres always a new day to look forward to
new pain i haven't known yet
and maybe a moment of happiness that will
help me live to another day.
i know that this is not the end....not yet.
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fallensilence
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2003-07-08 12:05:00]
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Re: anonymous (im still here)
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by ArdRi79 on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 03:47:54 PM AEST
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| Hell yeah this is a good one its sick sad and true, you have more guts then i do to write this, I like the 4rth stanza where you change from he to I like the pasage from father to son. |
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Re: anonymous (im still here)
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by wyrd_faerie on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 04:00:59 PM AEST
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| this is incredible...so sad... |
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Re: anonymous (im still here)
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 08:56:57 PM AEST
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well written but heartwrenching
Shari |
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