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Night Falls
Contributed by
JessiAnnie
on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 08:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Night falls, blackening the earth
Covering up feelings and emotions
Hiding how you feel
Comforting your sorrows
Taking away your pain
Night falls, like a warm blanket
Making everything all right
You dont have to deal anymore
Youre safe from life
Night falls, a vacation from the sun
Stars fill the coal-colored sky
As you try to forget your day
Will tomorrow be different?
You drift into the safe comfort of sleep
And wait for tomorrow
Copyright ©
JessiAnnie
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2003-07-08 20:35:00]
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Re: Night Falls
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 08:59:18 PM AEST
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very well written, sometimes the night does offer much solace
Shari |
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Re: Night Falls
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by fallensilence on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 09:31:51 PM AEST
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| this is really good. i really love the last stanza it definately makes the poem. -david |
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