|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
A touch of light
Contributed by
vincy
on
Wednesday, 9th July 2003 @ 01:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
sarcasticpoetry
|
The valley of Mazzzuura
feeds the flesh of oily rivers
that run and thirst towards
the muddy shores of
Sayyyyyyyammmmmuura.
For us, children of Gods and Goddesses
children of lifes many faces
of places, of races, of graces
for us Mazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzuuuuuurrrra
for us Saayyyyyyammmmmuuuuuuuurrrra
likewise the Kuukkkuukkiiiiiiiiikkuuu ocean
of tortoise broth & frogs legs
for us aaaaannnyyyyyything
for us eeevvvvvvvverything
for us who dwell on Earth
Of all planets and stars
for us no more ...nor less
than a touch of light
& a kissssssssssssssssssssssssssss of life.
Copyright ©
vincy
... [
2003-07-09 01:35:00]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: A touch of light
(User Rating: 1 )
by tinka_belle on
Wednesday, 9th July 2003 @ 04:54:39 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
very interesting vincy
i liked the way you used the exxxxxxxxxxxtttttrrrrrraaaaaaaaaa
leeeeetttttttteeeeerrrrss!!!! :)
|
|
|
Re: A touch of light
(User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on
Wednesday, 9th July 2003 @ 06:19:37 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| your expression is very beautiful my dear friend.. venkat |
|
|
Re: A touch of light
(User Rating: 1 )
by norm on
Wednesday, 9th July 2003 @ 06:47:12 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Unique is unique, so to speak,
The childred of earth have to eke,
Use it all, it's there to use,
This does not mean it's OK to abuse... |
|
|
Re: A touch of light
(User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on
Wednesday, 9th July 2003 @ 09:54:27 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
It's a gooooood write. I liiiiiiiiiike it!
Saira |
|
|
Re: A touch of light
(User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 06:47:12 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| good point, cool poem:) hugs n' love nessa |
|
|
Re: A touch of light
(User Rating: 1 )
by dafremen on
Thursday, 24th July 2003 @ 10:06:16 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
There is truth in words
There are lies in words
Tumbling alphabet blocks
That trip us as we climb the stair
For what awaits us there
Just might lead us away from the nursery
Into our heritage and humanity
Away from consumption's slow downward spiral
And into the waiting arms of life
You know what I mean. Finally, someone who understands what I mean.
Daf
|
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Site Help
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
