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Martirio
Contributed by
Good_King_Bragi
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Wednesday, 9th July 2003 @ 04:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
war
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Ho scritto la dichirazione dellindependenza
Con mio sangue per linchiostro
Ed una spirita pi forte del ferro,
Forgata; e temprata nella guerra e violenza.
Ho servuto la patria con tutta fidatezza
Ed adesso devo morrire, ma rimango libero:
Una vita spenta; ferma nel nero-
Cosicch la paese pu vivere in lucentezza.
Sto combattando alla fine amara!
E vorrei morrire; che cadere
Per uno sacrificio faccio ora
Muoio in battaglia, un martire
Cosicch gli altri possono vivere ancora
Lontano, dalla guerra che tutta fa soffrire!
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Re: Martirio
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 12:20:06 AM AEST
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Some corrections for you to ponder over:
line 2: "Con mio sangue per inchiostro" (take out the "L" and the apostrophe)
line 4 "Forgiata" not "Forgata"
line 5: "Ho servuto la patria con tutta la mia fiduce"
line 6: "morire" not "morrire"
line 9: "Sto in lotta alla fine amara!"
line 10: same problem as line 6
good try Good King! :)
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Re: Martirio
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 12:23:43 AM AEST
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missed something:
line 1: "declarazione" not "dichirazione" |
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Re: Martirio
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by Good_King_Bragi on
Tuesday, 15th July 2003 @ 02:58:14 AM AEST
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| Ho capito. Corezioni sono stata fatta. |
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