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Nothing I Can Do
Contributed by
squeesh
on
Wednesday, 9th July 2003 @ 05:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I feel so trapped
And theres nothing I can do
You have me pinned down
Trapped in a corner
Theres nothing I can do
You give me no space
You make my decisions for me
I fell like Im two
I cant go anywhere
Im trapped here with you
Im stuck with you
I try to get free
You always find me
I try telling you
You never listen
I write it down
You always find it
You invade my space
You tell me what to do
I cant get free
Im stuck here with you
Im getting older
You dont seem to notice
You look over me
Protect me day and night
I dont need your pity
I dont need your protection
Leave me a lone
I feel so trapped
And theres nothing I can do
Copyright ©
squeesh
... [
2003-07-09 05:05:00]
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Re: Nothing I Can Do
(User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTearz on
Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 07:01:43 AM AEST
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| Good, the repeating I don't like.. and the "i feel like i'm two" was a lame rhyme.. on a scale of 1-10 i give it a 4 |
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