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Forevermore
Contributed by
lostinlimbo
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Wednesday, 9th July 2003 @ 02:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I feel it rip me apart from inside
My pain and agony, the tears I can't hide
I shiver and shake without control
To think this thought that I know
How could she? What did I do wrong?
Stomped on my heart and said so long
What does he have that I don't?
What will he do that I won't?
I bet I can think of one thing for sure
With this blade and an irreversable cure
To give my life to prove my love
To bleed for her has to be enough
I'm so numb I can't feel the cut
But I feel the warmth force my eyes shut
Lying back and giving in
I hope she finds me soon, this I'll win
Goodbye, so long it's time to soar
Goodbye my love, I'll love you.. forevermore
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Re: Forevermore
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by yellow_sundragon on
Wednesday, 9th July 2003 @ 03:58:28 PM AEST
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This is so sad, and yet it's the most beautiful moment. Well done.
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Re: Forevermore
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by wyrd_faerie on
Wednesday, 9th July 2003 @ 04:24:36 PM AEST
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| very very beautiful...so sad... |
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Re: Forevermore
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 9th July 2003 @ 06:56:53 PM AEST
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very well written,, but disturbing to think that taking ones life will prove love..to me that is not romantic at all
Shari |
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