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An Angel's Punishment
Contributed by
Eternal_Darkness
on
Wednesday, 9th July 2003 @ 03:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Fierce eyes through the wand of heaven
Day of shadow, night of light
Echoed screams of forbidden sin
Echoed silence of magick's sight
An angel's punishment is immortal life
Hidden within the blood red sky
Within God's hands there lies the knife
The flashes of innocence are all a lie
Mortal pleasure, immortal pain
Death to innocence, birth to tears
The time has come to feel the rain
Nothing can erase the empty years
The nightmare is awake
The daydream is dead
Magick we learned to forsake
As is done, so is said
Faerie became the angel
Silk became her wings
She sits upon night's windowsill
Songs of hope she sings
Despair of yesterday now lay slain
the faeries sleep atop a hill
The sun has come to pass the rain
God's evil is truly his will
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Eternal_Darkness
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2003-07-09 15:35:00]
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Re: An Angel's Punishment
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by afraid_of_fear on
Wednesday, 9th July 2003 @ 03:44:28 PM AEST
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this is beautiful! Truly magickal. You are a very talented poet!
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Re: An Angel's Punishment
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by yellow_sundragon on
Wednesday, 9th July 2003 @ 03:52:57 PM AEST
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This is truly a masterpiece. Concepts are easy to understand, and yet paint a picture in the mind of the reader. Wonderfully worded to capture the plight.
You are an amazing poet.
*J* |
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Re: An Angel's Punishment
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 9th July 2003 @ 11:20:25 PM AEST
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| WELL DONE! Very well written! Christina |
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Re: An Angel's Punishment
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by DOCTERKRISITN on
Tuesday, 5th August 2003 @ 05:09:52 PM AEST
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wow this is really good it takes away my words
very good |
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