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Confusion
Contributed by
Sweet_alex
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Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 12:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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How can i tell if "we" are real?
that u feel the same thing that i feel.
When i see you, i feel it all,
can't breathe, can't eat, i'm gonna fall.
But if i do, i know your arms will save me,
And when u do that, that's when i'll see.
I'll find out how much our bond will grow,
but right now, not all your feelings show.
I finally found someone who's worthwhile,
You leave my heart beating for a mile.
Now off to more thinking i go,
But i end this, still wanting to know.
I've been falling for you for the longest time,
I'm all yours, but are you all mine?
Copyright ©
Sweet_alex
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2003-07-10 00:35:00]
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Re: Confusion
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by Dr_Calm on
Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 12:51:00 AM AEST
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Alex,
Very good piece. I especially enjoyed the emotion of the last two lines.
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Re: Confusion
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by shelby on
Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 02:35:44 AM AEST
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well done
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Re: Confusion
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by wyrd_faerie on
Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 01:33:31 PM AEST
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| ah...beautiful... |
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Re: Confusion
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by stargazer on
Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 09:43:06 PM AEST
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This poem touched me grately. I just recently asked myself this... and I realized, I needed to move on. Very well done..
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Re: Confusion
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by Crow on
Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 10:48:36 PM AEST
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i hope your dreams come true. Crow
nice work |
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